Hi everybody here is my next writing task I hope you like it! I spent quite alot of time on this project of mine. Have you done something similar like this? Bye!
Kia Ora Byesion. I like how you improved the sick sentences. I wonder if you could add more details that help to describe his exhaustion. Sweat dripped down his face, his breathing quicken, his face turned red... I also wonder what the city of sand looks like? I wonder what challenge he would face?
Kia Ora Byesion. I like how you improved the sick sentences. I wonder if you could add more details that help to describe his exhaustion. Sweat dripped down his face, his breathing quicken, his face turned red... I also wonder what the city of sand looks like? I wonder what challenge he would face?
ReplyDeleteThanks Nicole! I picture the city in the sand being held up by a mysterious force keeping it from falling down. How would you picture it Nicole?
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