Hi everyone its me again with my third writing task! yet again I spent a lot of time and effort into this and I truly hope that you will enjoy reading my work. So until we met again. Bye.
Kia ora Byesion. Great to see you blogging in the holidays. I really like the perspective on your door on slide 4. What do you think about your tenses on the first slide? If you need some more activities over the break check out the holiday blogging page.
Hi Byesion, good to see you doing some writing (and sharing) in the holidays. I really liked your title "The International Corridor", it suggests that the door leads to another country.
Woah, Amazing. Kia ora Byesion. My name is Lisiate, or Lisi.... or you can just call me Richard...... by the way, this might have been the best one I've seen today, I really like your punctuation, and your explanation, its pretty cool. By the way Ka kite ano, and Keep up the great work.
Thanks Richard for the very positive comment!Have you done anything similar to this? if so can you leave a link to it. I'd love to read and comment on it! Ka kite Richard!
Kia ora Byesion My name is Audrey and I got o saint puis x school which is in glen innes. I am year six and I like your writing task but the one that I love the most is the last slide because that man could go anywhere but if I was there i would like to go to rainbow z i hope you have a wonderful day and keep safe
Kia ora, Byesion, my name is taniela and i attend st pius x school, for your story i like you narrative writing name, the teleporting door if i was the man i would've gone to a bank and do something ;).
Kia ora Byesion. Great to see you blogging in the holidays. I really like the perspective on your door on slide 4. What do you think about your tenses on the first slide? If you need some more activities over the break check out the holiday blogging page.
ReplyDeleteHi Byesion, good to see you doing some writing (and sharing) in the holidays. I really liked your title "The International Corridor", it suggests that the door leads to another country.
ReplyDeleteHello my name is vili from sanit pius x in clen innes. keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteWoah, Amazing. Kia ora Byesion.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lisiate, or Lisi.... or you can just call me Richard...... by the way, this might have been the best one I've seen today, I really like your punctuation, and your explanation, its pretty cool. By the way Ka kite ano, and Keep up the great work.
Thanks Richard for the very positive comment!Have you done anything similar to this? if so can you leave a link to it. I'd love to read and comment on it! Ka kite Richard!
DeleteKia ora Byesion
ReplyDeleteMy name is Audrey and I got o saint puis x school which is in glen innes. I am year six and I like your writing task but the one that I love the most is the last slide because that man could go anywhere but if I was there i would like to go to rainbow z i hope you have a wonderful day and keep safe
Kia ora, Byesion,
ReplyDeletemy name is taniela and i attend st pius x school, for your story i like you narrative writing name, the teleporting door if i was the man i would've gone to a bank and do something ;).