Hi I'm Byesion and here is my scratch project about making a positive blog comment. Do you have any feedback for it? Is there something you think I could improve on? It would be really good if you could comment what i should do! My scratch project was very easy to do. Bye!
Kia ora Byesion. Great start. I liked the introduction of the second cat. I also like the way you mentioned 'in their eyes,' what a great way to explain different people's perspectives. One question, in the first sentence did you mean to say positive or did you mean quality?
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